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December 17, 2011
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When this hour ends
We shall have come full circle once again
These uphill battles are what we need
So just relax and breathe

Commonplace misconceptions
To break the myths, to change our perceptions
We shall have come full circle once again
When this hour ends
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Mood: Love ~ilove-sky Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love!
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!MonicaArlene Feb 29, 2012  Student Writer
Wow, I really like this! It's short and sweet, yet still manages to tell a whole story. It ended so beautifully, too!
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A lovely piece. I just love how you have the same line beginning the story as well as ending it. It really helps to illustrate the "full circle" of the piece. Wonderful job.
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